Saturday, June 8, 2013

The Kidnapping

The Kidnapping
By GenralJitsu


Prologue

Olivia found a way to get home, so she went home, when she got home, they thought something terrible had happened to her, and she told her parents everything about Jamaa they knew about Captain Gut (they were the same age, and if the Jamaasain law, then her parents are fine with it) and so the next day she went to school and as always Lilly, her BFF, was getting bullied by a girl named Ella, and she always stood up to her, so she walked up to Ella and started yelling at her, all the kids looked at her in wonderment, they were outside the principles window... he looked out, and came to Olivia, and said: "Olivia, you know you do not yell at other students, where have you been, and Ella, does this happen whenever Olivia is here?" Olivia was about to explain her absence when Ella says
"Yes sir, she does it to me everyday, she makes me feel so, so low" Olivia was starting to get angry she thought carefully of a trap, she said "Sir, if you trust what I say, its the other way around, you see Lilly, Ella bullies her, isn't that right everybody?" Everybody in the school started nodding, Jasmin, another one of Olivia's BFF's said "Sir, shes only defending Lilly, she only tells us about this sort of stuff" and Olivia said something else that made everybody look at her "Sir, the reason I havan't been at school is, I've been somewhere better, where im needed" the principle said "Olivia, school is more important than whatever you were doing your 13" he then continued "Olivia, you have done a great thing, Ella is going to get suspended for a week after the break" Olivia said to Jasmin and Lilly "See, its a great thing, the best thing to do is snitch!" the principle said "Olivia Jones, your suspended from school for a week!" Olivia yelled at him saying
"WHAT? WHY AM I SUSPENDED FROM SCHOOL FOR A WEEK? JUST 'COZ I SAID SNITCH? THE REASON I WASN'T IN SCHOOL 'COZ I'VE BEEN IN JAMAA A FAR BETTER PLACE THAN THIS!" She turned into her warrior Arctic Wolf  Genral ArcticGhost, she was wearing a black long spike collar and a black long spike wristband, on the other paw, a spirit glove, black tail armor, a spirit armor and a spirit helmet. she ran off as fast as she could to go Jamaa, Lilly and Jasmin followed her when she got home they were talking about Jamaa, she opened the door, her mom called to her from the kitchen saying, "Olivia, we've got some guests for you, their in the garden" she went to the garden finding the Alpha's. Sir Gilbert spoke first he said in a deep sharp voice, "Olivia, we've been thinking, and we've come to a choice, you will get the respect you deserve the credit of saving Jamaa from the phantoms, here" Sir Gilbert had handed her a bravery plaque, it had a paw in the air with a sword, he carried on "Olivia, you have been requested to become an Alpha, the Arctic Wolf Alpha, you need to come to Jamaa to train" Olivia was wondering if she could bring Jasmin and Lilly, they all said yes, they phoned their parents and told them everything, both of their parents said yes; into the portal they went....


Chapter 1

As they got up, the rainbow wisps were vanishing, they looked around, Jamaa Town-ship was full to the brim, everybody moved for the Alphas , Olivia, and the 2 new guests, they went to Jam-Mart Clothing, they bought a black sword,a normal colored fox hat, a black bow and arrow, and a black worn, they went to Olivia's den, all the members of her clan were there, IronClaws, StoneHeart, NightPaw, GhostFangs, EagleEye ect. They looked at Jasmin and Lilly and a kit, SnowEyes, asked, "who are these people?" Olivia replied
"These are my 2 BFF's Lilly, and Jasmin" she grabbed her Black Sword, her Black Worn, her Black Bow And Arrow, her Axe and all her spikes. She said to Lilly and Jasmin "Guys, could you look after my clan? Captain Gut's gonna help you look after it, I've got to do some Alpha training" Jasmin and Lilly agreed, so Olivia went to Cozmo's room and he taught her all about herbs and healing in a day, she went to all the other Alpha rooms and learned it all, Olivia was a Alpha.
She was honored, as the first Twoleg Alpha!

Chapter 2


After being told she had passed all the tests and had become a full Alpha, everybody knew of her achievement. The next day the clan went to the forest and had a small celebration, Olivia was standing near some bushes whilst Iron Claw gave a speech about why she deserved to be a Alpha, when all of a sudden 8 appendages wrapped around her, she howled, everybody turned to see her being pulled away, into the undergrowth kicking and punching with all her might, they ran after her, but they were too far away to catch her, there were phantoms trailing behind, slowing them down, The Phantom Resisance helped by attacking from the sides, but it was too late, they went into their portal, the Rebels followed them,  bringing the clan too...


Chapter 3

When they fell out from the black tunnel of evil, they clambered up clutching their weapons, and swarmed into the castle ready to fight, ready for anything, they demanded for The Phantom King to free Olivia; he said no, she had to win her freedom.
"What do you need?" Olivia cried.
The king purred with content, like an evil cat.
"Why, I want to make you compete in my illegal competitions! My minions would be elated to see an Alpha fight dark shells and my evil clan warriors."  Olivia snarled "Heck no! Im not helping you with your "illeagal" campetitions!" she bravely took and arrow and shot him in the eye, she ran and ran and ran, it wasn't fast enough, for the phantoms, she was moving like a snail, they caged her up with electron bars, they stole her power of shifting, shifting was her soul, they were harvesting her soul, killing her, would she survive?

3 comments:

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    1. Do you like Genral's stories? I give them a 7.5 out of 10, but nevertheless they are wonderful. Try emailing him if you can @
      genraljitsu@gmail.com
      and telling him that! Most people like fan mail!
      I gave him an average score because they are good stories, but grammar and more suspense would be appreciated. Also, he should write right from the blog (if he doesn't, I'm okay with it, but it has to be HIS) because somebody may accuse him of copying. Still, I recommend them!

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  2. Erm, Im a girl... Its okay :) its confusing anyway, it sounds like a boy username, but as I said, its okay :)

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