Monday, May 20, 2013

Preview: Nanyte Strikes Back

Yes, the badass antagonist returns. Happy? You should be, I'm revealing why the group of friends and family (Ledra, Bloda, Mia, Frost, Drakus, Vicky, Zion and Snowyclaw). I think I should stop my prattle and just get to the story.

Frost was sneaking a peek at the new Jamaasian Heroes Prophecy (Kindear's prophecy was no longer valid for some reason) when thunder rumbled.
She felt a tug in her gut, as had happened whenever one of the Jamaasian Heroes summoned her. Little floating bubbles indicated which hero needed help, but for some reason they were just nanite-filled bubbles.
There was NO Jamaasian Hero that had control over nanites except her, and she used Mira Feather images as a "signature".
Suddenly, a whirlwind of clouds opened up beneath her, and she was swallowed into darkness.

She awoke with two odd robots tugging at her. Several of the other Jamaasian Heroes were also struggling against the mecha-creatures, and to her horror more were being tugged into the space they were in now.
Just one whiff of the poisonous air told Frost she was in an industrial area of Vramaa, and that whoever owned this place sure didn't care about dusting his/her property.
Suddenly, an orb floated out of nowhere, with a little Nanyte-themed head inside.
What in Jamaa was going on?
Nanyte shook his head, laughing like some deranged maniac... not counting that DNA tampering made him one, of course.
"Oh, these beauties Mira blessed (or maybe cursed, thought Frost) with amazing powers and potential will do for powering up my Dusk Cannon, where I will promptly roboticize ALL OF JAMAA!" Nanyte hissed. He sounded like Darth Vader, which didn't really help that he was laughing like Santa and cackling like the Grinch.
Ledra opened her groggy eyes (apparently the DNA-Master had been napping when she was abducted) and managed to crack a smile.
"This guy is misusing copyright laws, and besides... he isn't combining the works of several voice actors in movies very well."
It was a lame joke, but worth it, as the robots rebelled against their programming (to her horror, Frost realized they were robot slaves) and nervously laughed.
Nanyte's face turned beet red, which didn't show since 89% of his face was golden mask.
Frost shuddered at the reference to her unpleasant time inhibited by Nanyte's soul.
"Those bastards need to learn a lesson! Robo-slaves, put them in the harnessers!" Nanyte shrieked, the tubes hooked up to his unstable spirit shaking like somebody ADHD was jiggling them on a sugar rush.
The robo-slaves nearly crushed some of Frost's vital organs as they dragged all of the Jamaasian Heroes to some odd tubes that seemed like little tubes with green glass with tubes dangling from the sides. Even more tubes (ugh!) connected the "coffins" to a large generator with a whopping TWO Mira Feathers powering it (Mira Feathers are super rare and powerful), and a metal cannon poking out of the roof like a telescope connected by EVEN MORE TUBES to the generator. Frost desperately tried to tap into the powers of the Elemental Feather that she thought she might possess, but it seemed to either be taking a break or simply not present.
With a painless blow, Frost and the other Jamaasian Heroes were knocked out with a single blow from the robo-slaves.

To be continued...

2 comments:

  1. This is so awesome! Keep up the good work--remember, practice makes perfect. You may or may not do this, but just saying--don't get discouraged if you never finish a story or can only get a beginning, end or middle written. IT ALL COUNTS. I've written so many partial stories!! Sometimes I sit down and just write a random little snippet. e.g--
    Kasha yawned and glanced around at her team-mates.
    "Hey, Ash! We going to get moving here, or what?" she finally called over to him. Ash flicked his ears but didn't actually look at her.
    "Yeah, pretty soon." he answered vaguely. Kasha stood up.
    "Come on! I'm bored stiff!"
    ~
    That was just on the spur of the moment that I wrote that. Just now. =P
    Just writing tons of those helps your writing skills and later on you may use that part in a story. Keep writing!! You show good talent!!!

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    1. Thanks, Zoraz, for the advice! Oh, and could you please write some stories for the blog? If you write enough you will be made an admin.

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