Sunday, May 5, 2013

A Human In Jamaa


By Genral Jitsu


Prologue
One day, a young girl named Olivia, was in her garden and in her garden a tree, the tree was very old, she was just about to get ready to settle down and read a book,Dragon Rider, Olivia loved mythical creatures she had a book case full books about them, she even thought that in some distant land, animals could talk, she was right but she didn't know it. She laid back on the tree, and fell back just as a gust of wind blew into her direction, and it was taking her into the land of talking animals...

Chapter 1
As she got up wisps of rainbow coloured air which dropped her were vanishing, she got up in a unknown place, which was the Jamaa Town-ship, but Olivia didn't know at the time, she saw the Jam-Mart clothing store and the sale sign and went inside, she didn't see anybody inside , but she could hear people coming, she spotted the recycle box and hid behind, nobody saw her, she heared laughing and two people walked inside, Olivia thought they were people but, they weren't they were animals, she looked out from her hiding spot, one was a Arctic Wolf and another a Snow Leopard, she was frozen with fear, the Snow Leopard said "Ugh! can't we just go Club Geos already?" the Arctic Wolf answered
"Not yet I need to buy a necklace, so until I get one, were not leaving!" they both sounded like girls, and all Olivia could think about was how could they talk? Their animals it's impossible! their  
brains couldn't have developed how to talk!

Once both the Snow Leopard and the Arctic Wolf left she sprang out of her hiding place, and ran out the door, but carefully, she didn't want to catch attention from the Arctic Wolf and Snow Leopard, she was constantly looking uncomfortably around, frightened the Snow Leopard and the Arctic Wolf or any other animal spot her, she was concerned about what they would do to her, she thought they would tare her to shreds, claw her apart, or something far far worse.

Chapter 2
She blindly walked into the forest, were all the Jammers were, training for their clans, and most out hunting with their clans or loners, she saw the slide and thought to herself, what if there's those talking animals were down that side? so she looked for another way to get down from the tree tops, she found the stairs on the tree and walked down, there were loads of Jammers at the other side so she luckily went down the right side, and missed getting spotted, but she walked into the wrong place and at the wrong time, she got spotted by one Jammer who yelled out "HUMAN!" and everybody just growled, snarled, and made an attempt to claw at her, but only one Jammer took kindness to Olivia, and that was a Arctic Wolf she said "Please, don't be afraid, it's okay" she turned to the other Jammers and said"You should be ashamed of your selves! you can clearly see she's lost!" and turned back to Olivia, who was trying to run away, and said"Come on we'll go to my den" and she smiled, whilst Olivia was left in a puzzled look and in a scarce tone said"Whats a den?" all the Jammers looked at her and laughed, whilst the Arctic Wolf replied"A den is a home, and im WinterBlossom  and whats your name?" Olivia looked at her an said whilst staggering to her feet as the tripped on a rock when everybody was laughing at her
"I-I-Im Olivia" WinterBlossom looked at her in and said" Well Olivia, that's a nice name" and she smiled sweetly and took Olivia to her den.

Chapter 3
When they finally got got to WinterBlossom's den there was a Arctic Wolf there, he had dark grey fur and his name was ThunderStorm, ThunderStorm said in a tone of disbelief"A human?"WinterBlossom just said
"Well, she is really lost, and if she's left out there she'll get attacked, eaten or something worse"ThunderStorm looked at WinterBlossom and said"okay, she can stay, but I don't want to smell of human!" WinterBlossom nodded her head, and got Olivia a cup of coca, and told her all about Jamaa.

Olivia fell asleep, dreaming about what other mythical creature is real, when she got awokon by ThunderStorm and he coldly said"Common you got some training to do!" then jerked out of her chair given a bow and arrow, a cross bow and a sword and dragged into the front garden. Olivia will never forget the training given, all the agonising pain, all the running up and down,  all the shooting of arrows and all the sword lashing. ThunderStorm knew she was ready to face the other Jammers, and go out hunting.

Chapter 4
Olivia was sent out to hunt, she didn't want to but she had to, she saw a penguin, a wooden blur and the penguin was down, she jerked the arrow out, it was covered in blood and it had a ring of blubber around it, a rabbit,also known as a bunny, wooden blur, a sad sad sight a bunny down, a pool of blood was beginning to come from where the arrow hit, all the Jammers stared in desbelief, eyes wide open and all Olivia said was"Just stair at the human in shock bam horror!"picked up her kill and walked off to WinterBlossom's den, all the eyes in the forest were on her.
She walked back to the den with her prize, ThunderStorm was annoyed with how much she captured, but at the same time pleased, and said tomorrow she would catch more, and so she went to sleep.

She was improving fast, so fast that ThunderStorm was always shocked with how much she caught, and they always sent her out once a week, as she always caught too many for a day, so instead they sent her once a week, but one day something was starting to Olivia...
The end of the beginning...

2 comments:

  1. That was AWESOME. MORE!! I WANT MORE!!!

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    1. Hey, Zoraz, maybe you should write your own story to demonstrate your talents!

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