Tuesday, July 16, 2013

Tallstar's Stories: Rogues of Jamaa; Mission

Wow, she's posting daily now! /).< I guess I don't need to worry about authors so much, as General has told me he may write again, Ibp has wrote again, Tempest promises to post when she comes back from summer camp, and I have TWO sagas I'm writing!

Here's more of the Rogues of Jamaa Saga, because I think you said you wanted me to write some of it:
Part 1
Mia awakened with a start. She was sure she had heard someone laugh in her sleep. Mia shrugged. It must have been a dream.
Looking around, Mia noticed Twilight was gone. For a moment, she wondered if Frost had been right. Then she stopped. What was she thinking? Twilight had probably just gotten homesick and had gone for a walk. Reassuring herself, she curled up again and fell asleep.
At the same time, Tango was taking a night walk when she was startled by a loud laugh. She narrowed her eyes and looked around. She couldn’t see anything. She must have been hearing things.
She continued her walk, and then stopped again. This time, she was SURE she had heard something. She looked up and saw something with wings. It was flying up in the sky. Tango slowly and silently used her earth powers to create a hill. She crept up to the top, huddled under a bush, and listened. 


  1. Part 2

    “Screech, do you read me? No one is around. Seems like a good time to attack. What about you? Over.”
    “Same for me, Twilight. That’s enough for tonight. Go back to that soft-hearted Arctic Wolf’s place. Over.”
    Silence filled the air. When Tango finally dared to look up, the sky was empty. She sat down to ponder what she had heard. They must have meant Mia when they were talking about the Arctic Wolf. She had to warn her.
    Tango got up and started to run, then halted. Who would believe her? It was well known Tango liked to play jokes, and that she could bend the Truth Spell to say that she was always telling the truth.
    Tango slumped onto the ground. Hope formed inside her. Wasn’t it worth a try? Maybe Mia would believe her, and would help her to convince the others.
    Tango stood up and raced as fast as her paws would carry her to Mia’s place. She knocked with her paw and the door opened. There stood a tiger, his eyes glinting. “Hello,” purred the tiger menacingly. “Why are you here?”
    Tango fought to keep her fur from bristling. “I’d like to see Mia please.”
    The tiger smiled, showing his teeth. “I’m sorry, but Mia is asleep. Come back later.”
    “I’m sorry,” Tango replied through gritted teeth,” But I need to see her now.”
    The tiger shook his head. “That is not possible.”
    “Let me through,” replied Tango, pushing some magic into her words to make the tiger obey.
    Finally, the tiger put up fighting. “All right. Come in.”
    Tango walked in and woke up Mia, who groaned.
    “What is it Tango?”
    Tango whispered into Mia’s ear. “I need to talk to you. In private.”
    “Fine, fine.” Mia got to her paws and went outside.
    Tango started. “Do you know anyone named-er- Twilight or Screech?”
    Mia slowly nodded. “Yes, I do. They’re two tigers who we found being chased by phantoms. Frost said to be careful. One of them is staying at my place. Why?”
    Tango spilled out everything she’d overheard. “Do you believe me?” She blurted the words out before she had time to think.
    Mia narrowed her eyes. “Sorry, Tango, but I don’t think so. You’re being rude to our visitors, having suspicions like that! Tango, I’m sorry, but I don’t think our visitors are doing any harm. Goodnight.”
    Tango felt hopeless, watching Mia walk away. Now what was she going to do?
    In Mia’s den, Twilight was hiding upstairs, listening to Mia and the rabbit’s conversation, as he had bugged Mia’s tail armor.
    “…. But I don’t think our visitors are doing any harm. Goodnight.”
    Twilight laughed evilly. How perfect! Of course, he would need to be more careful on patrols, but how lucky was he that the one hero who discovered the truth was the one that wasn’t believed!
    “Roar, do you read me? Over.”
    “Yes Twilight, what is it? You woke me up! Over.”
    “Someone discovered me. One of the heroes. But luckily, no one believed her. Over.”
    “Well, keep an eye on her. Do everything you can to prevent her from telling others. Even if it means making her forget. Do you understand? Over.”
    “Yes, of course. Over.”
    Twilight heard the door to the den swing open and quickly faked sleep. But before he fell asleep, he muttered something to himself.
    “That bunny is doomed…”
    To be continued….
    So, here is MY continuation to that...

    Mia opened a message-mirror-thingie in her magical mirror, sighing.
    "O mirror of miracles, bringer of messages, contact the almighty Frost in the dimension of Hyrestia!" said Mia.
    The mirror swirled and swirled, then an image formed of Frost's face, looking down at her own mirror.
    "Yes?" said Frost. "The holy priest we contacted helped us train. Mira said a creepy message-" Frost told Mia the message"-and the others are sleeping, including Savior and two Twolegs we found. What do you want?"
    Mia told her everything about Tango telling her something in distress.
    Immediately, Frost pounded the Mirror she held so hard that Mia felt the anger inside her.
    "AND YOU DID NOT BELIEVE HER?! THAT IS AN OUTRAGE! THIS CONFIRMS MY BIGGEST FEARS, GO GET THE OTHERS AND TELL THEM THIS HAS MY APPROVAL OF TRUTH! LOOK, I WONDER WHY YOU DIDN'T BELIEVE HER, AS I CAN SQUASH THE TRUTH OUT OF HER EVEN IS SHE IS BENDING THE TRUTH SPELL, SO I COMMAND YOU TO GET FORCES READY TO KICK THOSE GOONS OUT! NOW!!!!!" screamed Frost.
    Mia raised her paws in surrender.
    "Alright, alright, I'll do it!" she whimpered, running out of her house to collect the heroes still in Jamaa.

    Tallstar, please continue this, I want to tag-continue these stories!

    Bonus Content: Willow's Return: Part 1

    Here's the first part of the sequel to Willow's Compass I promised!
    Willow’s Return
    Lilac knew the Legend of the Phantom King well. It was her favorite story. Of the brave Willow, the one who had discovered the Temple of Zios, and how afterwards, Willow and the Phantom King disappeared forever. She often wondered where they went, and vowed to herself that she would find out and bring Willow back. Obviously, she didn’t know the truth (which is explained in the previous story, Willow’s Compass).
    One day, Lilac was walking down the bustling paths of Jamaa Township. She decided to take a peek in Jam Mart Clothing, as she had heard there were new items for sale. She ducked inside. Looking inside, she saw there was nothing interesting her. She turned to leave when something hanging up on the wall caught her eye.
    A beautiful turquoise necklace was hanging on the wall. It gleamed and sparkled like a diamond. And in the center was a beautiful bead, shaped just like a phantom.
    A sign was on the wall next to it. “Do not touch” read the sign. Why couldn’t you touch it once? A small voice seemed to say. Lilac agreed. Why not? She knew she shouldn’t, but she felt something physically pulling up her paw until it met the stone. Then she found herself taking it off the wall and putting it in her bag.
    When Lilac got to her den, the pull returned pulling her paws until she wore the necklace. Little did she know that it was the Phantom King’s invisible pull dragging her to the necklace.
    As soon as the necklace touched Lilac’s neck, everything around her disappeared. She felt herself falling. As she fell, she felt her leg brush something, and she recoiled, as it shocked her. Finally, she stopped falling. She braced herself to hit the ground, but she never did. She opened her eyes and nearly fainted from what she saw.
    Lilac (a rabbit), was floating in the air in the Chamber of Knowledge. Floating! Shocked, she discovered she could move, land on the ground, walk on the walls, anything she wanted. She realized this was fun! 
    Soon, Lilac discovered she was getting tired. Slowly, she floated towards the door, then flinched. Anytime she got within the boundary of the door, she received a sharp shock. The same happened with the windows too. Lilac slumped down in the air, an odd sight to see. 
    A young tiger walked in, and Lilac got an idea. She raced over to him. “Help me!” The tiger looked straight ahead as if he hadn’t heard anything. She looked at herself. She was see-through. 
    Lilac almost screamed. Why was she see-through? Suddenly frustrated, Lilac laid down in the air. 
    “I know, it does get a bit annoying, doesn’t it?”
    Lilac whirled around. There, standing in front of her, was the brave explorer, Willow.
    To be continued….

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